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Elio Wrote:His act of valor and selflessness earned notice from an agent of the Busters Organization. When the Busters Organization successfully helped in ending the civil war without any more violence, this agent approached Nix and asked if he'd be willing to join the Busters; they could use one with the skills and protective abilities as his. He could still complete his studies and come over once he's graduated, and may choose to continue studying in the US if he wanted to.

Nix agreed without hesitation.

Small correction

The Busters Organization, even though they are famous, are not suitable enough to handle large affairs right now. Possibly in the future, but they are too small of an organization to even afford agents, if you caught my drift. A proposed revision would still same the sentiment that an agent approached Nix and informed him about a “small organization” that seemingly would be up in his alley. 

Aside from that, everything looks good. 

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I don't remember if I said it on discord or not, so imma waste a post and just write here that I removed the Identity/Alias section on all my character templates! If anything else needs to be adjusted, let me know.
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(01-14-2019, 09:05 AM)ShineCero Wrote:
Elio Wrote:His act of valor and selflessness earned notice from an agent of the Busters Organization. When the Busters Organization successfully helped in ending the civil war without any more violence, this agent approached Nix and asked if he'd be willing to join the Busters; they could use one with the skills and protective abilities as his. He could still complete his studies and come over once he's graduated, and may choose to continue studying in the US if he wanted to.

Nix agreed without hesitation.

Small correction

The Busters Organization, even though they are famous, are not suitable enough to handle large affairs right now. Possibly in the future, but they are too small of an organization to even afford agents, if you caught my drift. A proposed revision would still same the sentiment that an agent approached Nix and informed him about a “small organization” that seemingly would be up in his alley. 

Aside from that, everything looks good. 

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Meta Knight and Z, it looks good.

Made the necessary changes to his background, let me know if it's all good!
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