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IN-PROGRESSO (soup) Art thing
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Im drawing this from a dream. Basic details I'm aiming for are person holding (cuddling?) their white cat while both are asleep. The cat is happy to be close to their owner.
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#2
It looks like you're making progress! However, we need to work on a couple things.

You might want to arch the back a little more. It looks a bit too straight to me. Think about a person cuddling, unless they are standing up, their back will not be that straight. The same can be applied to the cat. Remember that cats are very flexible and they can contort their bodies.

Another recommendation would be to add more curves to the legs. Humans legs are not perfectly straight. Maybe give the person some calf muscles? Try practicing giving curves to your person.
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#3
Looks pretty good as an in-progress work.


Have you finished the work yet, or you need some advice and whatnot?
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#4
I plan to restart it with a different position, I feel too many people are lost on the design, but shool has been pretty heavy so I havent gotten to do that yet.
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#5
Ah okay. When you have an updated drawing of it, post it so we can check it out!
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